Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawę błędów. To ma być historyjka, która się wydarzyła i opisałam ją do gazety. (to dokończenie , nie od początku) We saw someone in water , he shout for help and wave hands. Mr Miller jump to water and swam to him. I called fo

Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawę błędów. To ma być historyjka, która się wydarzyła i opisałam ją do gazety. (to dokończenie , nie od początku) We saw someone in water , he shout for help and wave hands. Mr Miller jump to water and swam to him. I called for help and i told where we are and discribed situation. They stayed on the surface and waited for help. Suddenly they saw helicopter. Man from helicopter droped the rope and pulled up Mr Miller and person from water. The helicopter flew to hospital. I went to journalist and gave him my report on the page. He added our story on the newspaper with my name. Next day i read my relation in newspaper.
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We saw someone in the water. He has been screaming for help and has been waving with his hands. Mr Miller jumped into the water and swam to him. I called for help and I told them where we are and discribed the situation. They stayed on the surface and waited for help. Suddenly, they saw a helicopter. A man from the helicopter dropped the rope and pulled up Mr Miller and a person from water. The helicopter flew to the hospital. I went to journalist and gave him my report on the page. He added our story on the newspaper with my name. Next day I have read my relation in the newspaper.

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