Sprawdźcie czy to dobrze napisałem i poprawcie błędy: At first I went for a walk to a park. It was a summer. Suddenly I saw that a big dog ran away a garden and it ran after me. I was frightened. I ran away and fell up. Fortunately a man helped me. I was

Sprawdźcie czy to dobrze napisałem i poprawcie błędy: At first I went for a walk to a park. It was a summer. Suddenly I saw that a big dog ran away a garden and it ran after me. I was frightened. I ran away and fell up. Fortunately a man helped me. I was relieved. It was a bad day.
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At first I went for a walk to a park. It was a summer. Suddenly I saw a big dog run away from a garden and it ran after me. I was frightened. I ran away and tripped. Fortunately a man helped me. I was relieved. It was a bad day.

At first I went for a walk to the park. It was a summertime. Suddenly I saw a big dog running away from the garden. Then it passed by me. I was frightened. I ran away and fell down. Fortunately, somebody helped me. I was very relieved. To sum up, it was a really bad day.

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