1. Zamiast "completing matura exam" wpisałabym "passing". 2."presently" w drugim zdaniu, 2. akapitu zamieniłabym na "At present" (mała zmiana, ale subiektywnie lepiej brzmi). 3. W drugim zdaniu 4. akapitu "completion" zmieniłabym na "graduating from such...". 4. "I will not have a problem with finding a job". 5. "Being at this university gives the possibility..." 6. "The university..." (wyrzuć "at") LUB "At the university there are more than..." 7. "including a variety of sport sections,which allow students to develop (their)passions and interests" 8. "The possibilites are countless..." 9. "..to rather specialized..." 10. Wyrzucić "of the ending". 11. "As a result of attending the course..." 12. "In addition, different exercises provided by the course will surely help me eliminate mistakes I commonly commit" Jeśli chodzi o skrócenie tekstu to możesz zastąpić (w 4. akapicie) od "At the university there are..." do końca akapitu tym: Since the university has more than 100 research groups as well as dozens of organisations, the possibilities are truly countless. Ranging from artistic groups, through various forms of recreation to rather specialized activities (such as sailing).
