1 Hej proszę o sprawdzenie tego tekstu czy jest dobrze :) One of the biggest problems my generation is technology. It is an important part of our world and is very much needed. However, cell phones and computers have become more important than relation

1 Hej proszę o sprawdzenie tego tekstu czy jest dobrze :) One of the biggest problems my generation is technology. It is an important part of our world and is very much needed. However, cell phones and computers have become more important than relationships. The children began to not perform his duties and also neglected its relationship with the family. We should do something about it. By telephones and computers, our health is getting worse. We gaze breaks and neglect science. In order to improve our situation should be less use telephones and computers and go outside more.
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One of the biggest problems of my generation is technology. It is an important part of our world and is very much needed. However, cell phones and computers have become more important than relationships. The children began to not perform his duties and also neglected its relationship with the family. We should do something about it. By telephones and computers, our health is getting worse. We gaze breaks and neglect science. In order to improve our situation should be less use telephones and computers and go outside more.

ani jednego błędu mi się tak   wydaje :P

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