Proszę o napisanie opowiadania o najszczęśliwszym lub najgorszym dniu w życiu. Około 10 zdań. Proszę zacząć od ,,It was in... /lub/ It was about .. years old." Proszę użyć ,, then, after that, next, finally" Proszę użyć czasu Past Continuous.

it was then when i was 8 years old. i was sitting in my room. next day it was my birthday. my father come in.he was keeping something behind him. when i was asking him what was that what was he keeping my mother come into my room. then dad took a beautiful small dog. finally he gave it me! after that i put him on my bed.it was the best day of my life!