prosze o napisanie my hero

Proszę mi napisać czy mam dobrze napisany opis : My hero is Alvaro Soler. He was born 9 january in 1991. He lives in Spanish. His mather is spanish and father is german. He was a famous singer in 2014. My hero has got his own album wchih it was name Eter

Proszę mi napisać czy mam dobrze napisany opis : My hero is Alvaro Soler. He was born 9 january in 1991. He lives in Spanish. His mather is spanish and father is german. He was a famous singer in 2014. My hero has got his own album wchih it was n...